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Post by tomlinsam_ Tue Jul 22, 2014 6:18 pm

S h e w o k e u p. S h e w a s s t i l l a l i v e, s u r p r i s i n g l y. H e r B e s t F w e n d c o n v i n c e d h e r t h a t i t w a s n' t s o b a d l i v i n g a l i t t l e w h i l e l o n g e r. S h e m a d e i t t o 3 4 y e a r s o l d, w h y n o t m a k e i t t o 8 0? W e l l s h e d i d. B e s i d e h e r w a s t h e l o v e o f h e r l i f e, Z e n. T h e r e w a s n o a b s o l u t e c h a n c e s h e w a s g o i n g t o e n d u p w i t h h i m t h o u g h. H o w d i d i t h a p p e n? N o o n e k n o w s. K a y n a n d h i m, w a n t e d t o g o t o t h e p a r k, o r a t l e a s t e x p l o r e t h e w o r l d. T h e y k n e w i t w a s a l m o s t t h e r e t i m e t o g o. T he y l e f t w i t h o u t t h e n u r s e s k n o w i n g. T h e y p r e t t y m u s h r e b e l e d. T o f e e l i n c o n t r o l. T o f e e l f r e e. T o f e e l y o u n g. T o r e l i v e, b u t a s g r a n d p a r e n t s. T h e y w e n t s h o p p i n g, n o t g i v i n g a f l y i n g f u d g e a b o u t w h a t t h e t e e n a g e r s s a y. T h e y k n o w w h a t i t f e l t t o b e a t e e n a g e r o n c e. T h e y k n o w r i g h t f r o m w r o n g. T h e i r g e n e r a t i o n i s w a s t i n g. I t' s b e e n w a s t i n g. L a t e r, t h e y l e f t t o t h e p a r k l a s t. T o "t h e r e s p o t." A s t h e i r l a s t s e c o n d s w e r e f a d i n g, t h e y t o l d e a c h. . ."I l o v e y o u K a y n." S h e r e p l i e d, "I l o v e y o u m o r e." T h e y c l o s e d t h e i r e y e s, l e a n i n g t h e i r h e a d s o n e a c h o t h e r, h o l d i n g h a n d s w i t h t e a r s d r i p p i n g, n o t o f s a d n e s s, b u t j o y.
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Post by Oops! a.k.a Kathy -.- Tue Jul 22, 2014 6:31 pm

I pretty much died in one paragraph. It was very nice Smile Thanks xx.
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